Hi bloggers👋! I will be sharing my descriptive writing📝 about a waterfall🌊. Some weeks ago our teacher👨 gave us a picture🖼 as a prompt to describe💭. Our teacher👨 also asked us to put it in a slide📄. Hope you like❤😁 it! Here is my presentation📄 below👇:
This is an awesome piece of writing. Visually powerful and descriptively rich. How could you use punctuation marks to support story?
ReplyDeleteHey Tayyibah
ReplyDeleteThat was really beautiful.. It read like poetry with all its descriptive language. I could picture a lot of it in my head!
How do you think it might feel to be in a forest like that?
Keep it up!
How do you think it might feel to walk
Hello Tayyibah.
ReplyDeleteIt's me Devanshi. That is a really good descriptive writing! I could actually imagine walking through there.
From Devanshi
Kia ora Tayyibah,
ReplyDeleteWow! What an amazing piece of descriptive writing. I like how you used interesting words, similes and metaphors.
I wonder the same thing as Mr Wikaira. I wonder how we can use punctuation to support your writing?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa